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A new lvl from me!!

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Here is a new lvl from me... i hope to get some reviews or stuff... a replay would be very nice http://sites.euit.com/mikko.melakoski/mikko331.lev
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http://zworqy.com/up/files/mik331ju.rec

nat very good time but atleast it is a replay :P

FIrst thought was that it was a lookalike juble's radioactive level, would have been better if it stayed that way :X rest of the lev was not at all fun and was really just a tunnel with some noobish looking obstacles, next time please decide if your making a pipe or a normal level :X
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Hey there!

Here´s a level i finished a couple of minutes ago. I´d like to know what you think of the graphics, I´ve kind of experimented a bit. :lol: Enjoy! :)

http://www.kopaka.dk/up/updir/AL04.lev
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Seems like it was pretty bad aight!..?
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Here is one I've just made. please rate it someone and be honest.
http://zworqy.com/up/files/niNco002.lev
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Shake it! by Bogart

Playability : 4 / 10

Well, i know that this level was more focused on the visual aspect so, i didn't expect much for the playability. The level is very linear and doesn't suggest anything new. It mainly consists in rollercoasters so, the hoyling is the only thing that can bring something to playing this level.

Visualy : 7 / 10

The level is visualy pretty good. All masks and grass are well used as textures and there's no glitch with the grass. The spiky hangs could be more regular, it would make more professionnal. Another thing... i personnaly think that levels shouldn't use more than 2 main masks as foreground ( e.g. : Ground and bricks ). When there's 3 textures or more, the level loses some kind of personnality. For example, the radioactivity level by Juble( see page 4 of this topic ) uses only 2 types of masks ( Ground and grass ) which gives a really single look to the level. Besides, the level looks great!

Overall : 6.1 / 10

The level is definitly good looking but, Bogart, you should work on the playability factor, that's the main point in level designing. Lots of people don't really care if the level looks good, they prefer multipe paths/styles.

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It is......

Nice.....

Can't say too much more about it though..... :roll:
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niN wrote:Here is one I've just made. please rate it someone and be honest.
http://zworqy.com/up/files/niNco002.lev
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Do you think I could post up a level soon?
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me? sure go ahead. you guys out there, nevermind reviewing my level :) lukas gave me a personal review :)
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You talking 'bout Lukazz? :D
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yeah;)
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He's vaon auf mein friendz!

ps. any levz?!?! :?
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I gtat one, just made it. please review it :)

http://zworqy.com/up/files/Nn004.lev
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http://zworqy.com/up/files/errorLev.lev

Please review it :roll:
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Hey people! This is my level pack...Are 36 levels, but now I have 46...
Please, play them and send me comments... :)


http://www.elmasite.com/level,action-vi ... id-113.htm
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AS! Level pack by Sla

Playability : 6.3 / 10

I could have been more generous here but, there was a lack of playability in the first 20-30 levels. Then, the last 30 levels are starting to be nice. What i mainly disliked in the first levels was that there was too many headbanger-typed level and un-cool gravity apples (because, gravity can be cool! ). The levels were also to linear, something that affects lots of beginner levels. Fortunatly, this is less appearant in the last levels because, they include more interesting tricks, less gravity and less rollercoasters.

Visualy : 7.9 / 10

Grass is good, pictures are good, masks are good but, nothing surprising! The levels are in majority well designed. But one thing i disliked, again only in the first levels, too big use of LGRs. If you make levels that use LGR, please include them in the .rar because, it's annoying to visit Moposite everytime you need LGR and, i don't even thing those LGRs are on the Moposite. Anyway, besides that, good looking levels.

Overall : 7.2 / 10

This judgement may be a little offtrack because, i haven't played a lot the levels. I just cruised around on my non-elma computer. The levels are fun, simple, that's it!

Best times : You really think i'll write them all in here !?

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Ok.
The first 30 levels are very old, of when I was a beginner. :wink:

Thank you for your opinion! :D
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Heres two new maps i have been working on, map 30 and map 31. Heres the maps, in the same zip file:
Enjoy :)
Download: http://www.fileupyours.com/files/55782/ ... v%2031.zip
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Here is my first levelpack. It's old, but i hope you /ll enjoy some of them. Please give me your opinion.
http://mxb.dk/upload/ScHuMaChEr%20Levs.zip
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Need opinions:

http://zworqy.com/up/files/perpWkE.lev

Pretty goddamn long level, but suitable for both n00b and pr0 styles.
Anyway, if you don't wanna finish it, it could also be fun for "fastest collecting of 10 apples" or "most apples in 1 minute" and so on.
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nice level wke
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Found two of my very old and very tricky levels. What do you think?

http://zworqy.com/up/files/Maz16.lev
http://zworqy.com/up/files/Maz19.lev
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Post by donciux »

Ok so this is my second ever lev. http://zworqy.com/up/files/TTC%201.lev contains some pipes and stuf i hope you like it :)
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Hi! Made a new lev just now... http://zworqy.com/up/files/Daggy.23.lev
Hope you like it... I know that it's not that good, but i think it's OK.

Hmm... can someone help me with a name to the lev?
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Daggy wrote:Hi! Made a new lev just now... http://zworqy.com/up/files/Daggy.23.lev
Hope you like it... I know that it's not that good, but i think it's OK.

Hmm... can someone help me with a name to the lev?
Its a good level for me... I see that you like Olliz :wink:
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Well, that looks quite professional. You've improved a lot. I would name it 'Bridge to forrest mountine'
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Nice level. Yeah, Olliz style, I like them. Made 46,78 first finish
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Sla wrote:
Daggy wrote:Hi! Made a new lev just now... http://zworqy.com/up/files/Daggy.23.lev
Hope you like it... I know that it's not that good, but i think it's OK.

Hmm... can someone help me with a name to the lev?
Its a good level for me... I see that you like Olliz :wink:
Haha! Thats rigth... Olliz is my levmaker hero nr 1 :wink:
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Daggy wrote:
Sla wrote:
Daggy wrote:Hi! Made a new lev just now... http://zworqy.com/up/files/Daggy.23.lev
Hope you like it... I know that it's not that good, but i think it's OK.

Hmm... can someone help me with a name to the lev?
Its a good level for me... I see that you like Olliz :wink:
Haha! Thats rigth... Olliz is my levmaker hero nr 1 :wink:
i love Olliz too :*
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Sla wrote:
Daggy wrote:
Sla wrote:
Daggy wrote:Hi! Made a new lev just now... http://zworqy.com/up/files/Daggy.23.lev
Hope you like it... I know that it's not that good, but i think it's OK.

Hmm... can someone help me with a name to the lev?
Its a good level for me... I see that you like Olliz :wink:
Haha! Thats rigth... Olliz is my levmaker hero nr 1 :wink:
i love Olliz too :*
I think everybody loves Olliz! its kinda sad that he isn't making lvls anymore... :(
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Yeah, 'cause when he's not making levels he's so goddamn annoying.
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MaZ wrote:Found two of my very old and very tricky levels. What do you think?

http://zworqy.com/up/files/Maz16.lev
http://zworqy.com/up/files/Maz19.lev
Hey... this lvls are veeery hard. its almost impossible to complete that killerlvl (nr 19) :roll:
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Post by Harald Hasch »

ive finished that level, probabnly when it was released

and i luv 'em, maz :D upload teh more?
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Post by Daggy »

Juble wrote:Since I released these levels in #battle, I will release them for everyone who is intrested.

http://www.mxb.dk/upload2/Jb01.lev

http://www.mxb.dk/upload2/Jb03.lev


Atma: I'm sorry, I have the non-pictured version of Juble001, if you want PM me and I'll give you a link to download it. :wink:

Feel free to give constructive feedback :)
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Post by Sla »

I did some levels...

Sla Pack http://up.k10x.net/mkbjbocehzzui/3levsslapack.rar
Hoyl pack http://up.k10x.net/jyydfmfqwmyrg/newhoyls.rar
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Made a new lev... Fruits to teh max!

http://zworqy.com/up/files/Daggy.24.lev
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Strange fruit by Daggy

Playability : 7.6 / 10

Ok, i first want to say that this level might not have the best playability but, i nevertheless had quite some fun playing it. The level is very simple and has one part where you can use some creativity. The rest of the level is very basic and linear, but there are still some variations in your moves that can cut some houndreds. Hoylas will probably like the level.

Visualy : 7.8 / 10

The level has a fruit theme. It actually looks quite good at first sight. Some simple graphics and colors, very effective. Grass is well applicated and pictures are not abused. Once again, it is not comparable to zebra's or juble's level but more like zworqy's... I like it!

Overall : 8.0 / 10

Definitly a fun level. It might belong a bit more to a battle than to a level pack but, i surely appreciated it. Hope to see more from Daggy in the future.

Best time : 30.52 ... had school keyboard so the run sucks a bit in the end.

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Daggy wrote:Made a new lev... Fruits to teh max!

http://zworqy.com/up/files/Daggy.24.lev
Daggy... for you future lvls.. plz leave that (dot) out. Daggy[.]24.lev because then elma editor can't figure it out, and says ez ERROR.
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Xiphias wrote:
Daggy wrote:Made a new lev... Fruits to teh max!

http://zworqy.com/up/files/Daggy.24.lev
Daggy... for you future lvls.. plz leave that (dot) out. Daggy[.]24.lev because then elma editor can't figure it out, and says ez ERROR.

Okey... Will remember.

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Post by Daggy »

C'mon... Upload lvls!! I wanna play some new lvls...

Another level made by me: http://zworqy.com/up/files/Daggy25.lev
Made it like 4 in the nigth, so its nat that good 8)
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More levels
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I have the levels of PoCho. I think he is retired :cry:
PoCho levels: http://www.mxb.dk/upload/PoChoLevs.rar
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Sla pack
I removed some old levels (and nobs) and added five new levels (the last five). Good luck!
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Post by The_BoneLESS »

Please, put one level at the time. It's level reviewing topic, not levelpack reviewing topic :wink:

I'll take a look at your two levels soon...
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It is true, sorry :oops:
I really like your comments of the levels Bone, seriously. I hope that you do one on all my levels again...; )
Take a look at my FIVE new levs...
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Please someone review this level. I'd like to know what you like/ dislike. Please tell me what I could do better etc.. I would apprechiate it very much!
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Attractive by niN

Playability : 8.2 / 10

There are many styles possible from the start of the level, all the way to the end, that might aid or make the run slower. There are countless variations possible with each one, and all are relatively straightforward, and especially with the apple in the squeezy part, that is not as much of a nusciance as I suspected, it actually makes the lev flow even better.
All in all a rather addictive Play.

Visuals : 7.9 / 10

This level is a jewel in it's simplicity, really something to look at, but that's mainly because of the polygons, which were used spectaculary, even the scarce placing of the hang picture was definately worth it.

Overall : 8.9 / 10

This is a really good lev, would be super for battles because of it's straightforward playability, I would like to see more levels with this sort of playability, because that's what really makes it a Jewel

Best time : 42.78 sorta okay run, would be possible under 42, but much stylework needed for me. I just went the simple way ;D

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