the poem topic

A.K.B. · Post by **A.K.B.** » 10 Aug 2009, 13:58

You are suck.

Elma.

Fuck.

roope · Post by **roope** » 30 Aug 2009, 23:54

Mongolialainen kukka
Evilä, ei ei ei
varpaassani on karva
se on omena
nick-o-matic
ulostetta joka paikassa

My entry for Mäntyharjus library 150 years poem contest. Will translate for request.

Xiphias · Post by **Xiphias** » 30 Aug 2009, 23:58

request

roope · Post by **roope** » 31 Aug 2009, 00:04

Mongolian flower
Evilä, no no no
there's a hair in my toe
it's an apple
nick-o-matic
feces everywhere

FinMan · Post by **FinMan** » 31 Aug 2009, 08:45

reps

nick-o-matic · Post by **nick-o-matic** » 31 Aug 2009, 10:22

Nice roope

Grace · Post by **Grace** » 31 Aug 2009, 15:38

So beautiful.

i cried.

Bismuth · Post by **Bismuth** » 31 Aug 2009, 23:35

If you really made this for that library, I respect you roope

roope · Post by **roope** » 31 Aug 2009, 23:43

Yes, I did send it in o/ the winning poem will be printed in a set of bookmarks.

Bismuth · Post by **Bismuth** » 31 Aug 2009, 23:53

LOL would be mega funny

Cfilorvy · Post by **Cfilorvy** » 2 Sep 2009, 16:21

"A new cup-level!" I said with a smile,
after an hour, I found the best style,
the lev was cool, I was all set,
but one damn apple was impsy to get.

I höyled for hours, which turned to a day,
all food and drinks was shoveled away,
that impsy apple, I was so close,
one pixel or something, and then I froze.

I then blacked out, and went to the greater,
my sister and brother found me two days later,
the screen was on, it was green and vain,
"You failed to finish, play again?"

A short week after I was down the ground,
with all my family and friends all around,
there grew up a tree, it looked like a planch,
with a red small apple, hanging from a branch.

Bismuth · Post by **Bismuth** » 2 Sep 2009, 22:16

pawq · Post by **pawq** » 2 Sep 2009, 23:43

fucking awesome Cfilorvy!!!!!! THATS AWESOME, gratss!!

Xiphias · Post by **Xiphias** » 3 Sep 2009, 00:13

I liked.. but I don't like the "A" when ppl mean "I"

Cfilorvy · Post by **Cfilorvy** » 4 Sep 2009, 08:38

Xiphias wrote:I liked.. but I don't like the "A" when ppl mean "I"

Aaah.. typo.. Edited now

A.K.B. · Post by **A.K.B.** » 4 Sep 2009, 14:14

Just fantastic.

Finally quality on this site!

Xiphias · Post by **Xiphias** » 4 Sep 2009, 14:40

Cfilorvy wrote:
Xiphias wrote:I liked.. but I don't like the "A" when ppl mean "I"
Aaah.. typo.. Edited now

ah k thx =) I thought it was like some ppl on belma.. "A just improved warm pu )))"

Bismuth · Post by **Bismuth** » 7 Sep 2009, 03:47

No it's because they are so nab that they typed "A" as a name when opening elma for the first time, to save time.

teajay · Post by **teajay** » 10 Sep 2009, 18:03

cute story!

Cfilorvy · Post by **Cfilorvy** » 6 May 2010, 09:21

I woke up one morning, with a vast premonition,
"höyl for WR in Warm Up, that is your mission",
I turned on the computer, half past eleven,
my sucky PR; 14.27.

My summer vacation had come to a start,
I sat on my room with one mission at heart,
all of my friends had gone far, far away,
so my excuses were those, and now I could stay.

With exceptions of eating and a few hours sleep,
a was dug down in belma, and yes, very deep,
After one höyling month, 14.03,
"I can actually make it", I started to see.

Then, one cloudy morning, a crossed the red line,
when I finished the level, and saw, .99!
I sent rec in to px, but damn, I was late,
damn Zweq, he had höyled too, and got .98

gimp · Post by **gimp** » 6 May 2010, 09:47

that shits good

Xiphias · Post by **Xiphias** » 6 May 2010, 14:39

a ≠ I

Igge · Post by **Igge** » 6 May 2010, 14:51

Xiphias wrote:a ≠ I

He acrossed the red line. Sach pun.

Cfilorvy · Post by **Cfilorvy** » 6 May 2010, 15:10

Xiphias wrote:a ≠ I

Haha! This time I intentionally made that typo, just for you Xiph

You've found them both times

But, a crossed (acrossed) the line sound a bit cool too

A.K.B. · Post by **A.K.B.** » 8 May 2010, 06:37

Haha, true story!

umiz · Post by **umiz** » 9 May 2010, 20:02

elma-dikt:

nu står jag i valet och kvalet
elma var kul på 00-talet

ska jag fortsätta att lira?
eller ska jag endast dricka

jag har slutat mången gång
när abstinensen är som värst bryter jag ut i denna sång:

kanske man skulle göra en bejublad comeback \\o \o/ o//
sätta världsrekord på någon gammal track \o7
nej det är väl omöjligt \o)
rentav löjligt [o/
att det skulle gå (o/
när ryssar och mongolier höylar på \o/

Igge · Post by **Igge** » 9 May 2010, 20:39

Sjukt bra ju!

Lousku · Post by **Lousku** » 17 Aug 2010, 06:07

pomegranate of everything important in secret areaing - visitation 5. enforce the fruit

poems is bads
elma are goods
goods can be eaten
john can be beaten

outside it rains
water many pains
but also can cleanse
a head that is dense
if never go out
will find a sprout
in hair because dirty
zworqy turns thirty

elma in world can
show concealed funnies
but is not better than
ultrasoft bunnies

truth awaits in fifty-six

teajay · Post by **teajay** » 30 Aug 2010, 20:34

Django Reinhardt
a 16-bar rhythmic overview

na-boom chick na-boom chick na-boom chick na-boom chick
na-boom chick na-boom chick na-boom chick na-boom chick
na-boom chick na-boom chick na-boom chick na-boom chick
na-boom chick na-boom chick na-boom chick na-boom chick

na-boom dum-dum-dum na-boom dum-dum-dum
na-boom dum-dum-dum dum-dum-dum-dum
da-boom dam-dam-dam dam-dam-dam-dam
daa-aa-aa-aam da-da-da-dam da-da-da-dam-da-aa-aam

Mawane · Post by **Mawane** » 6 Sep 2010, 03:33

u

me

us

all together

<3

Lousku · Post by **Lousku** » 6 Sep 2010, 10:17

pomegranate of everything important in secret areaing - visitation 6. death

boom

Cfilorvy · Post by **Cfilorvy** » 10 Mar 2011, 23:11

Some random limerick

She told me her boyfriend was gone,
Excited, I thought: "I've won!",
I cruised down her pipes,
while searching for wipes,
after reaching her flower, I was done.

another version:

She told me her boyfriend was gone,
Excited, I thought: "I've won!",
I cruised down her pipe,
I felt she was ripe,
after reaching her flower, I was done.

Bismuth · Post by **Bismuth** » 25 Jul 2011, 09:33

Today is, like many might say
A very, very special day;
It is as hot, bright and sunny,
As it is nice, sweet and funny.

It's the kind of moment when
You look a bit behind and
Consider how fast time goes:
So quick you would want to pause.

Try to fully live the moment,
Is what I actually meant;
Because today's a special day,
Today is your happy birthday.

I suck at poetry + it is late + English is my second language + I am lame = this
I wrote that to a girl on facebook and then thought "wtf is this crap" and removed it and just said some yay-birthday standard boring useless shit. Sad story is true. I guess it's better than awkwardness.

pawq · Post by **pawq** » 25 Jul 2011, 11:19

I think you should've posted it no matter how shitty it is o,o because it's not that shitty, typical teen poem :D)

Bismuth · Post by **Bismuth** » 25 Jul 2011, 19:17

Well I'm not typical and I don't act like a teen anymore, therefore it is shitty.

pawq · Post by **pawq** » 25 Jul 2011, 20:51

Bismuth wrote:I don't act like a teen anymore

heh :d

abruzzi · Post by **abruzzi** » 25 Jul 2011, 21:37

I wrote that to a girl on facebook

I don't act like a teen anymore

gimp · Post by **gimp** » 25 Jul 2011, 22:06

I have written many poems and songs for girls when I have a girlfriend, here is one of them:

You

Her swift movement can lift the soul of any man
And when I wake the sun does not gleam upon my face
But upon her grace
I ask myself what meaning do my ears, my taste, and feeling have when all I need
Are merely my eyes?

Through her glow I find my serenity, my peace
As I'm thoughtless, she is my only joy and release
And as she speaks, that voice could daze me for eternity
And I wonder and ask myself, what need is my taste for, my feeling and touch
When I have my ears?

With skin like feathers, I stroke her cheek
I lose myself forever, my knees weak
Shivers up my spine, and tingles on the back of my neck
I ask myself, whats the meaning of taste
When all I need is my feeling and her touch?

And then we kiss
And as I taste her lips, close my eyes
Block all sound, and lose all feeling
I ask myself, what's the meaning of anything
When all I need is you?

Bismuth · Post by **Bismuth** » 25 Jul 2011, 23:22

abruzzi wrote:
I wrote that to a girl on facebook

I don't act like a teen anymore

hence the deletion. grow a brain.

That's nice gimp, you're a much better poet than I am.

teajay · Post by **teajay** » 28 Apr 2012, 21:40

TODAY IS SO GHEY
I wanted to say
but then I said HAPPEY BIRTHDAY
and she said okay

roope · Post by **roope** » 9 May 2012, 22:21

i feel like spamming on mopolauta
nyt ei jumalauta jumalakaan auta