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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by culinko » 15 Nov 2010, 13:03

Zodiax wrote:why don't you all make levels and I'll play them this time?
so i'll have to make something better in order to critise it? since today, i can't argue about the matrix movies, because i've never done a better film? (i like matrix, but this was just an example, the first movie that came on my mind). what sick logic is that? keep advises from them, they know what they talk about (especially Igge)
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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Igge » 15 Nov 2010, 13:13

Zodiax wrote:And why do you all hate my level?
Haven't we been clear enough?
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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Zweq » 15 Nov 2010, 15:14

hi, im new at this computer game. review my level plz
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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by FinMan » 15 Nov 2010, 15:24

I have been reading this topic carefully since you posted your first level. And I can say that if you uploaded it to eol as a first finish balle, it would have been very enjoyable level.
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Both times were my first finishes in each lev, so they are easily improvable. Fun levels though. Keep making them and I'll keep playing them.
So this is what you call "hating your level"? Oh, it was not hate, I'm sure about that. And what CuLiNo said about rating things you havent done yourself was a good point; it just gives different kinds of views in things, just like elma levels, where experienced designers give rating and tips based on own fails and succesfully done things and the ones that don't have the experience give their answers in bigger scales.

Most of the answers and ratings I saw were really well explained, just read them again with a lot of time. :wink: What I can say, you seem to be one of those who can become really good in levmaking. Keep doing it!

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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by pawq » 15 Nov 2010, 18:47

hello zweq, i think your level is very nice, make more and you'll become a very professional level maker

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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Kazeta » 16 Nov 2010, 02:46

FinMan wrote:What I can say, you seem to be one of those who can become really good in levmaking. Keep doing it!

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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Mrrrr » 16 Nov 2010, 03:11

Zodiax wrote:why don't you all make levels and I'll play them this time? since you are so certain that you are pros and I'm a noob without even a trace of potential.
Most members here made their levels. You should check around this advertising section and download some. Watch some recs. You'll see why you're a noob.

And who said anything about potential? Everyone has it. You just need to practice, practice and practice. And then... practice some more.
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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Zodiax » 16 Nov 2010, 03:25

Mrrrr wrote:
Zodiax wrote:why don't you all make levels and I'll play them this time? since you are so certain that you are pros and I'm a noob without even a trace of potential.
Most members here made their levels. You should check around this advertising section and download some. Watch some recs. You'll see why you're a noob.

And who said anything about potential? Everyone has it. You just need to practice, practice and practice. And then... practice some more.
Ok. I'll practice

I've made another two levels today(considering everyone's advice) so they will probably be a lot better than my previous levels that I shared here. I can't give them now though, because I'm on my gf's pc and I gotta go with her to the mall soon.

So I'll attach them later, when I'm back at home.

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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Zodiax » 16 Nov 2010, 03:55

OHHHHHHH yeah nobody have told me yet:

What
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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Igge » 16 Nov 2010, 04:01

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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Zodiax » 16 Nov 2010, 04:09

Can you give me explanation? I don't understand what I need to do.

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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Zodiax » 16 Nov 2010, 04:37

Wtf, I don't get it, it's for playing online with players? WOw that would be so fun.

So c an you explain dude? oh sorry I guessI made you mad because of what happened

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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Zodiax » 17 Nov 2010, 05:04

ok, can someone tell me how I install that thing? I think it says I need to have v1.2 but I'm not sure if I do or how to update it.

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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Chris » 17 Nov 2010, 12:25

Zodiax wrote:ok, can someone tell me how I install that thing? I think it says I need to have v1.2 but I'm not sure if I do or how to update it.
Get this: http://up.k10x.net/ebvhqlpicfjui/EOLBeta.zip

Then register on eol site. If you can't connect sent pm to kopaka or mila or other eol admin.
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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by SveinR » 17 Nov 2010, 14:09

To get version 1.2 (which you need in order to install and run EOL), download it from http://paprika.moposite.com/programs/up ... elma12.zip and follow the instructions in http://paprika.moposite.com/txt/Elma12.txt.

Installation instructions for EOL you can find here: http://zworqy.com/elmawiki/index.php/Installing_EOL
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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Zodiax » 18 Nov 2010, 04:17

SveinR wrote:To get version 1.2 (which you need in order to install and run EOL), download it from http://paprika.moposite.com/programs/up ... elma12.zip and follow the instructions in http://paprika.moposite.com/txt/Elma12.txt.

Installation instructions for EOL you can find here: http://zworqy.com/elmawiki/index.php/Installing_EOL
Ok I've done the instructions in http://paprika.moposite.com/txt/Elma12.txt. , so how do I start playing online?

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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Igge » 18 Nov 2010, 04:41

Sign up here and then go to #battle on ircnet and ask for validation.
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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Zodiax » 18 Nov 2010, 04:47

Igge wrote:Sign up here and then go to #battle on ircnet and ask for validation.
I've signed up already yesterday. What's ircnet? And what validation do I need?

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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by anpdad » 18 Nov 2010, 10:47

wow, private-chattish-derailed-offtopic-thread-with-double-and-triple-posts. Maybe try googling or reading wiki at eol.sshoyer.net by yourself sometimes? :(

p.s. cock.lev is awesome

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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Zodiax » 18 Nov 2010, 11:06

ANpDaD wrote:wow, private-chattish-derailed-offtopic-thread-with-double-and-triple-posts. Maybe try googling or reading wiki at eol.sshoyer.net by yourself sometimes? :(

p.s. cock.lev is awesome
Well I'm new here and don't really know where to look for info like that. I was just asking nicely for that particular thing so there's nothing wrong with that.

And thanks, yeah, I think that's the only good level that I made. Though everyone think that all are bad.

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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Zodiax » 18 Nov 2010, 12:15

ok so can somebody tell me once and for all? or if you are too tired to explain just tell me where I can read instructions on how to play online.

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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by SveinR » 18 Nov 2010, 12:26

If you have successfully installed Elma 1.2 (is it running, does it work?):

Then download EOL from http://up.k10x.net/ebvhqlpicfjui/EOLBeta.zip.
Follow the installation instructions in http://zworqy.com/elmawiki/index.php/Installing_EOL.
You need to change the IP in eolconf.exe to 173.236.167.53.
Playing instructions: http://zworqy.com/elmawiki/index.php/Playing_Online

In order to be able to log into EOL, you need to have registered an account at http://eol.sshoyer.net/ and your account needs to be activated by a moderator. I could do it, but I couldn't find a user called Zodiax anywhere.

The best way to ask further questions would be through IRC. The easiest way to use it is to download mIRC (http://www.mirc.com/).
Log into server IRCnet, channel #battle. Just choose one of the available IRCnet servers, probably best to use the Israeli one if that's where you're from. Ask someone there, or send a PM to one of the EOL moderators/admins (http://eol.sshoyer.net/?s=help&crew=true) in lauta if your account hasn't been activated.
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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Lousku » 18 Nov 2010, 16:57

Zodiax wrote:Though everyone think that all are bad.
This guy is a troll. Pity.
then again i don't know anything
maybe easier not to think abouut alöl things thought than not things thought ... or something..=?

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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Zodiax » 19 Nov 2010, 05:18

I'm on Mirc but everybody on there is silent, for some raeson. I never use mirc so I don't know how I can start talking to anybody...

Anyway I opened the config thing but I don't see where to put the IP address... anyway I need to talk to someonne on mirc so i can ask them more quickly. so dude, do you use mirc? so you should go on so I can ask you on there.

oh yea this is just a question I wanna ask now. how the hell did u know im israeli?

And lousQ: how am I troll for saying that??

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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Zodiax » 19 Nov 2010, 05:25

That mirc thing is so annoying!!! please tell me how I get it to work. :cry:

Sorry for double posting so often, I'll edit post instead from now on

I just registered now, it sent me a confrimation mail and I clicked the link. However, I don't know if my account is activated. So can you activate? Are you from the ELma online moderator team or something?

And hoyl shit you joined this forum 8 years ago in 2002. Probably an expert huh?

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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Bludek » 19 Nov 2010, 10:07

Zodiax wrote: ... And hoyl shit you joined this forum 8 years ago in 2002 ...
Best elma-related misspelled word ever :D :D :D

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Post by SveinR » 19 Nov 2010, 10:40

Zodiax wrote:Anyway I opened the config thing but I don't see where to put the IP address...
Look here: http://up.k10x.net/sapzfqtpnjsmp/eolconf.JPG
Zodiax wrote:I just registered now, it sent me a confrimation mail and I clicked the link. However, I don't know if my account is activated. So can you activate? Are you from the ELma online moderator team or something?
Fine, you've been activated.

An even easier way to use IRC is through your web browser. Just go to http://webchat.xs4all.nl/index.php and write your nickname and choose the channel #battle (choose "Other" in the Chatchannel dropdown, and write #battle in the text field below).

This thread has gone way off-topic, so further questions you may have about eol you should rather post in another topic, preferably in the Problems section: http://mopolauta.moposite.com/viewforum.php?f=4.
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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Igge » 19 Nov 2010, 16:44

The typical thing for an admin to do after saying so would be to move the posts accordingly. :roll: I'm :roll: just :roll: saying. :roll:
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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Zodiax » 20 Nov 2010, 03:46

Ok, sorry, I'll not ask about this anymore. However, I'll post in the problems section now because there's something else I need assistance with.

So guys can you make a level, and I'll play this time? I mean I've made several ones but haven't seen any coming from you.

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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Zodiax » 20 Nov 2010, 11:09

Wow playing online was so fun

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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Haruhi » 6 Dec 2010, 13:28

Zodiax - if you make more levels, we will play them. Just know that Igge is considered the best modern designer by most of the scene, so his advice is to be considered.
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Post by A.K.B. » 6 Jan 2011, 16:46

igge + levels? whate
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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by pawq » 22 Apr 2011, 22:27

dunno topic again
but hehhe, just found around 10 sheets of paper all filled with levs drawn with a pencil during classes in secondary school some 2-3 years ago :DDDD gonna make some of them into real levs ;D

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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Pab » 21 Jul 2011, 23:27

i made cool levs at literature some years ago, and look my perfectik use of lenguage now
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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Hosp » 24 Dec 2011, 14:47

Here's my Christmas present for a y'all!
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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by pawq » 24 Dec 2011, 14:50

Nekits should design nekffs during his english classes to improve

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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Bjenn » 18 Feb 2012, 13:12

Pretty cool battle level I just battled, different routes pasibel, Ali won with 48, Zero different style with 52.
http://elmaonline.net/?s=battles&b=29182
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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Lousku » 18 Feb 2012, 13:13

Bjenn wrote:different routes pasibel
WOAH! :o
then again i don't know anything
maybe easier not to think abouut alöl things thought than not things thought ... or something..=?

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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Igge » 18 Feb 2012, 13:14

May as well rename this "The brag topic" and have people post all their good levels and circle jerk. I wonder when someone last actually reviewed a level in this topic.
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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Hosp » 25 Feb 2012, 15:07

Dunno where to post this but these are truly great levels from the meeting that infected, Luther, Ramone, BarTeK and Ice had somewhere in Gothenburg. They played 1h TT on it.
I played them a bit and have now 9/10 WRs. But since there's barely any competition since it's only me playing, I will advertise about it here!

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Post by Unknown » 12 Mar 2012, 13:30

0aapsi05 by Unknown

Hi I want some review of my lev :!:
Some serious, like BoneLESS did, tnx

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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by roope » 12 Mar 2012, 15:48

Beisik nice apple harvest. Didn't take too long to find at least one oneround style, made crappy 1:26:95
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Post by Unknown » 12 Mar 2012, 20:13

Yes there was a vigorous review :roll:
Any better ?

ps: can you upload the style you used ?

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Post by roope » 12 Mar 2012, 20:25

It's an apple harvest. Not much to comment. Visually looks like an apple harvest. Playability is pretty apple harvest-ish.

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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Lousku » 12 Mar 2012, 20:31

Apart from the umiz faces, norm playable AH. 4,5/5 because doesn't taste like apple.
then again i don't know anything
maybe easier not to think abouut alöl things thought than not things thought ... or something..=?

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Post by Unknown » 12 Mar 2012, 20:55

Hmm. Ok, maybe I should make different lev's

Tnx for feedback :!:

I have different style roope, my time is 1.19.xx

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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Bjenn » 16 Mar 2012, 19:31

Big battle level which was played yesterday http://elmaonline.net/?s=battles&b=30802
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Post by ville_j » 16 Mar 2012, 19:34

Shit lev.
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Post by Orcc » 16 Mar 2012, 21:34

Bjenn reviews a lev

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Re: Level Review Topic

Post by Zorrow » 17 Feb 2013, 19:02

Hey all. I dont know if this thread is still active, but I'd appreciate it if someone can please review my levels I created lately. Im pretty much new to creating levels, and i have not much experience, so I'd like to hear how I can improve myself and such.

Please play my levels and attach your replay playing my levels. I'd be very interested to see your replays playing my levels.

Ive attached the levels to this post.
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