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Yeah. I gave it a shot. Didn't want to try it anymore. It's not that it necessarily is so hard to complete, just that one rarey bothers trying to complete very long levels like that for more than a certain period of time.huli wrote:seems to me that nobody has completed my track or??
Ya....he's got a point huli...the lev isn't exactly what u'd call...fun to play but it also isn't very much a hard level like SveinR says...
But maybe it's cuz u are kinda unknown (although i have seen ur name before)
If it were a well-known player's level....ppl would probly play it more but that is just my opinion
btw i'm not saying that ur lev is under-rated either
But maybe it's cuz u are kinda unknown (although i have seen ur name before)
If it were a well-known player's level....ppl would probly play it more but that is just my opinion
btw i'm not saying that ur lev is under-rated either
Total Time: 38:35,14
here some of my lvls
here is some of my lvls.. they arent hard but i would want to know some best times and comments http://sites.euit.com/mikko.melakoski/c ... baanat.rar
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http://www.kurki.buildtolearn.net/uploa ... uski19.lev
Once again i did a level not thinking abuot its playability as much as its artistic value. youll understand what i mean when you download the level.
Once again i did a level not thinking abuot its playability as much as its artistic value. youll understand what i mean when you download the level.
No regrets
Are you LOST?
Are you LOST?
Playablility: 8.0 /1 0
The start is very smooth, then, the hang is a little bitte annoying because most time the back wheel stucks a bit, the rest part is pretty nice, and the end is a bit tricky
Visually: 5.5 / 10
I don't like it so much, there is no gras, some of vertexes are not so clean made, but still 5.5 because i think it was not easy to make this, and it looks really fancy, i also miss pics here
Overall: 6.5 / 10
Simply and insane level. I could play it for years and not get tired of it... OK, maybe i'm putting a little too much but, the level is really great for all the pie eaters and lovers...
Best time : Only made it to the apple
- Lukazz [NoT]
The start is very smooth, then, the hang is a little bitte annoying because most time the back wheel stucks a bit, the rest part is pretty nice, and the end is a bit tricky
Visually: 5.5 / 10
I don't like it so much, there is no gras, some of vertexes are not so clean made, but still 5.5 because i think it was not easy to make this, and it looks really fancy, i also miss pics here
Overall: 6.5 / 10
Simply and insane level. I could play it for years and not get tired of it... OK, maybe i'm putting a little too much but, the level is really great for all the pie eaters and lovers...
Best time : Only made it to the apple
- Lukazz [NoT]
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Where is the main polygon by Juski
Playablility: 7.1 / 10
Ok, maybe the level is a little too short here. It's fun for at least 5 minutes but, you really get tired of the level. The 2 or 3 tricks involved in the level are pretty nice, I really would have loved to see a bigger level with more tricks like these. You reaally are good in making annoying short levels.
Visually: 2.8 / 10
I can't really tell anything good about the design. I know that it must have taken a while to do it but, it's not that good-looking. It's just some kind of eye catching design.
Overall: 5.1 / 10
It's a fun level to play and the design is for sure original. If you ever publish a pack with levels of that playability and maybe with smoother designs, i would play it for sure...
Best time : 7;88
- BoneLESS [HHIT]
Playablility: 7.1 / 10
Ok, maybe the level is a little too short here. It's fun for at least 5 minutes but, you really get tired of the level. The 2 or 3 tricks involved in the level are pretty nice, I really would have loved to see a bigger level with more tricks like these. You reaally are good in making annoying short levels.
Visually: 2.8 / 10
I can't really tell anything good about the design. I know that it must have taken a while to do it but, it's not that good-looking. It's just some kind of eye catching design.
Overall: 5.1 / 10
It's a fun level to play and the design is for sure original. If you ever publish a pack with levels of that playability and maybe with smoother designs, i would play it for sure...
Best time : 7;88
- BoneLESS [HHIT]
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Hell's kitchen by Juble
Playability : 9.4 / 10
I checked back the older pages of this thread to see if i hadn't reviewed a level and BANG, i see a Juble level that i hadn't even tried ! I was not deceived... The first trick is pretty simple; a flip over a "pole" into a pipe. Pretty sweet and not that hard to make. Then, there's a little compressing to make it under a very good looking pole. Some tricks again into pipe to other trick to pipe... The the last part, many styles for this one but, the fastest is easily guessable. Like Juble said, many semi-hard tricks but, once you've understood the level motion, you can easily finish it. The level flow is excellent, nothing really stops you and you never get to much speed, everything is this : excellent !
Visualy : 9.7 / 10
As i opened the level, i was stunned. The level is not filled with huge textures and pictures but wow, the simple textures and polygons makes the level a pleasure to look at. Another very cool thing is the texture made on the two "poles", very nicely done ( still can't figure out how he did the effect ). Some might say the grass could be better and more equal but, i don't really care if the grass is perfect or almost... As usual, a beautiful level by Juble.
Overall : 9.5 / 10
Surely one of the better-looking and fun-to-play level i've seen this year. You obviously have to like at least a little pipes to appreciate the level... and i do love pipes ...
Best time :23;56
- BoneLESS [HHIT]
Playability : 9.4 / 10
I checked back the older pages of this thread to see if i hadn't reviewed a level and BANG, i see a Juble level that i hadn't even tried ! I was not deceived... The first trick is pretty simple; a flip over a "pole" into a pipe. Pretty sweet and not that hard to make. Then, there's a little compressing to make it under a very good looking pole. Some tricks again into pipe to other trick to pipe... The the last part, many styles for this one but, the fastest is easily guessable. Like Juble said, many semi-hard tricks but, once you've understood the level motion, you can easily finish it. The level flow is excellent, nothing really stops you and you never get to much speed, everything is this : excellent !
Visualy : 9.7 / 10
As i opened the level, i was stunned. The level is not filled with huge textures and pictures but wow, the simple textures and polygons makes the level a pleasure to look at. Another very cool thing is the texture made on the two "poles", very nicely done ( still can't figure out how he did the effect ). Some might say the grass could be better and more equal but, i don't really care if the grass is perfect or almost... As usual, a beautiful level by Juble.
Overall : 9.5 / 10
Surely one of the better-looking and fun-to-play level i've seen this year. You obviously have to like at least a little pipes to appreciate the level... and i do love pipes ...
Best time :23;56
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Very very very long by huli
Playability : 3.4 / 10
Hummm... this is a level that i can't say i appreciated but, i'll for sure give you some tips. First of all, never make levels where you easily gain too much speed for the level, so, you don't kill yourself everytime you get in contact with a wall ( happens at least 5 times in the level ). Second very important point, never use as much gravity apples as in this level. Some levels have like 2 or 3 gravity changes and that is well enough. Another factor that makes the level less playable is that the level isn't smooth, you know, sometimes, you play a level and everything is sweet. You can also make less 'spiky' polygons, try making /¯\ instead of /\ ( except in some cases ). I also never liked levels where the words "take this apple first" or "now here" or anything like because, it indicated that the track to keep is very unclear. A last thing, make the level a little shorter, people usually hate too long levels, after 2 minutes and half, i wasn't even at the half of the level, kinda despairing.
Visually : 4.5 / 10
This is hard to say, the level itself doesn't look that bad but, a lot of small things affected my eyes while playing. First, the lack of grass makes the level a little more boring to play. A good thing, you put some pictures to put some life in the level. Another small things that doesn't appear in great levels is that you use too much polygons "very close to each other". Try using the less polygons you can, it makes better-looking levels.
Overall : 4.01 / 10
My opinion on this level is weird, i dislike it in a way because it really looks like a noob level but, in another way, i almost enjoy riding through the level and trying to finish it... ok level i gues...
Best time : None yet
- BoneLESS [HHIT]
Playability : 3.4 / 10
Hummm... this is a level that i can't say i appreciated but, i'll for sure give you some tips. First of all, never make levels where you easily gain too much speed for the level, so, you don't kill yourself everytime you get in contact with a wall ( happens at least 5 times in the level ). Second very important point, never use as much gravity apples as in this level. Some levels have like 2 or 3 gravity changes and that is well enough. Another factor that makes the level less playable is that the level isn't smooth, you know, sometimes, you play a level and everything is sweet. You can also make less 'spiky' polygons, try making /¯\ instead of /\ ( except in some cases ). I also never liked levels where the words "take this apple first" or "now here" or anything like because, it indicated that the track to keep is very unclear. A last thing, make the level a little shorter, people usually hate too long levels, after 2 minutes and half, i wasn't even at the half of the level, kinda despairing.
Visually : 4.5 / 10
This is hard to say, the level itself doesn't look that bad but, a lot of small things affected my eyes while playing. First, the lack of grass makes the level a little more boring to play. A good thing, you put some pictures to put some life in the level. Another small things that doesn't appear in great levels is that you use too much polygons "very close to each other". Try using the less polygons you can, it makes better-looking levels.
Overall : 4.01 / 10
My opinion on this level is weird, i dislike it in a way because it really looks like a noob level but, in another way, i almost enjoy riding through the level and trying to finish it... ok level i gues...
Best time : None yet
- BoneLESS [HHIT]
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hi
thx for the tips!! try my other lvls from http://sites.euit.com/mikko.melakoski/c ... wnload.htm tell me some times and stuff and i would get happy
monkey style level pack (small edition) =)
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mmd level pack by me (got)
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from Russia with love =)))
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hummm... can you just put one level at the time
I can't review packs of 20 levels and more, i'm human after all
I can't review packs of 20 levels and more, i'm human after all
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My elma track
this is one of my favorite trackshttp://sites.euit.com/mikko.melakoski/c ... kko889.lev a rewiew from u would be just perfekt.
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Garden of apples by huli
Playability : 7.7 / 10
When you try the level at first, you kinda think : "bahh.. another noob level" but after giving it a try ( cause i have to review some levels on spare time ), i figured out that the level was much more enjoyable than i thought. Not a complicated level, but, efficient. I usually don't like level where you can get lot of speed but, it's well used in that one. There's a major trick that can save you lot of time and if huli planned the trick, i can tell you he has the sense of doing levels. Of course, the trick is hard cause the center polygon is kinda too large but, it gives a little more challenge. Appreciated this level.
Visually : 3.9 / 10
Here is where the level gets worse. First, i never liked the bridge picture, and it is not better when placed in front of the player. Second, the grass is waaay to thick. Another factor that annoyed my eyes was the too big amount of pictures ( for example : grass pictures and rocks pictures ). A last thing that always annoyed me are the 'very close but not enough" polygons. Just try to substitute lots of close polygons to one complex polygon.
Overall : 6.3 / 10
If you see beyond the visual aspect of the level, you'll surely appreciate the level more... Good level.
Best time : 58;25
- BoneLESS [HHIT]
Playability : 7.7 / 10
When you try the level at first, you kinda think : "bahh.. another noob level" but after giving it a try ( cause i have to review some levels on spare time ), i figured out that the level was much more enjoyable than i thought. Not a complicated level, but, efficient. I usually don't like level where you can get lot of speed but, it's well used in that one. There's a major trick that can save you lot of time and if huli planned the trick, i can tell you he has the sense of doing levels. Of course, the trick is hard cause the center polygon is kinda too large but, it gives a little more challenge. Appreciated this level.
Visually : 3.9 / 10
Here is where the level gets worse. First, i never liked the bridge picture, and it is not better when placed in front of the player. Second, the grass is waaay to thick. Another factor that annoyed my eyes was the too big amount of pictures ( for example : grass pictures and rocks pictures ). A last thing that always annoyed me are the 'very close but not enough" polygons. Just try to substitute lots of close polygons to one complex polygon.
Overall : 6.3 / 10
If you see beyond the visual aspect of the level, you'll surely appreciate the level more... Good level.
Best time : 58;25
- BoneLESS [HHIT]
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HI
THANK U ! here is another lvl from me... would be nice with a rewiew... i made the lvl about 2weeks ago.. and a replay like on the last rewiew would be perfect!:D http://sites.euit.com/mikko.melakoski/c ... hah321.lev
Hi
Hi, I'm new, got a level here for you to review
http://sites.euit.com/ossi.wallin-koivi ... usta10.lev
http://sites.euit.com/ossi.wallin-koivi ... usta10.lev
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Simply upload your level on some puplic uplaod service like www.Kopaka.dk/up or http://www.kurki.buildtolearn.net/upload/ and paste the link to the level in here.Bogart wrote:Someone who can help me with submitting a lev? I have really high thoughts about it, please?
Wow thanks a lot for that one and so fast
If you want to try it, here it is:
http://www.kopaka.dk/up/updir/AL01.lev
About the lev: A bit short, but I think it´s playable for a long time... cause there are a few different styles and one style beats the others easy, if you make it of course...
If you want to try it, here it is:
http://www.kopaka.dk/up/updir/AL01.lev
About the lev: A bit short, but I think it´s playable for a long time... cause there are a few different styles and one style beats the others easy, if you make it of course...
copy boneless style ;-)
I Donno What by Bogart
Playability: 8.8 / 10
First thing that impressed me was the start. A decent start is something every level needs, otherwise it's not worth playing. The good thing here is that you can immediatly build up speed. The hang is well done, the route is simple but höyläble.
The jump is a little hard to learn, though that makes me want to play just that bit more. The level has a nice length, it lets you fight for the 20 second limit.
Visually: 6.5 / 10
Although there aren't any pictures, the level isn't ugly.
Together with the brick texture there has been made a good use of frameworks. No random verteces are to be found in this level.
Overall: 8.1 / 10
This one really jumps out. It is fascinating because of hidden, impossible routes you still want to try. Tad short, but a good höyl. Basetimes were pretty fit too.
Best time: 19,86
- tijsjoris [MK]
Playability: 8.8 / 10
First thing that impressed me was the start. A decent start is something every level needs, otherwise it's not worth playing. The good thing here is that you can immediatly build up speed. The hang is well done, the route is simple but höyläble.
The jump is a little hard to learn, though that makes me want to play just that bit more. The level has a nice length, it lets you fight for the 20 second limit.
Visually: 6.5 / 10
Although there aren't any pictures, the level isn't ugly.
Together with the brick texture there has been made a good use of frameworks. No random verteces are to be found in this level.
Overall: 8.1 / 10
This one really jumps out. It is fascinating because of hidden, impossible routes you still want to try. Tad short, but a good höyl. Basetimes were pretty fit too.
Best time: 19,86
- tijsjoris [MK]
Could you guys take a look at this rec and tell me if it´s possible. It´s the super-style I was talking about...
http://www.kopaka.dk/up/updir/al01mayb.rec
Ps. Dont check this rec before you have played the lev, it would destroy the fun...
http://www.kopaka.dk/up/updir/al01mayb.rec
Ps. Dont check this rec before you have played the lev, it would destroy the fun...
I cannot believe what my eyes just saw, impressing... that´s all I can say.
Do this shortcut make the lev better or worse? Any suggestions of some changes?
Also, very off-topic. Do you know a forum or thread where I can ask people how they like the levs to be? So as: with pipes, many different styles or a lev with really great graphics. I want to make another lev but have no idea what kind of lev.
Do this shortcut make the lev better or worse? Any suggestions of some changes?
Also, very off-topic. Do you know a forum or thread where I can ask people how they like the levs to be? So as: with pipes, many different styles or a lev with really great graphics. I want to make another lev but have no idea what kind of lev.
How come nobody has reviewed my lev yet? is it really that terrible?
Just curious since its been there for at least a couple of weeks, and im feeling kinda rejected here..
well heres a link anyway..lets see if i have better luck this time
http://sites.euit.com/ossi.wallin-koivi ... usta10.lev
Just curious since its been there for at least a couple of weeks, and im feeling kinda rejected here..
well heres a link anyway..lets see if i have better luck this time
http://sites.euit.com/ossi.wallin-koivi ... usta10.lev
Apinamies: Sorry but all I can say is that I didn´t enjoy your level I coldn´t find a single good path to follow... just my opinion and I´m a noob.
I have now made another level, try it if you want to... It´s called Spinning in the trees. I guess that´s what it´s all about...
http://www.kopaka.dk/up/updir/AL03.lev
I have now made another level, try it if you want to... It´s called Spinning in the trees. I guess that´s what it´s all about...
http://www.kopaka.dk/up/updir/AL03.lev
quite coal lev imo but check what happens with vsync off: ;XApinamies wrote:How come nobody has reviewed my lev yet? is it really that terrible?
Just curious since its been there for at least a couple of weeks, and im feeling kinda rejected here..
well heres a link anyway..lets see if i have better luck this time
http://sites.euit.com/ossi.wallin-koivi ... usta10.lev
http://www.kopaka.dk/up/updir/musta10J.rec
thanks for the tip. http://www.kopaka.dk/up/updir/000upthe.recBogart wrote:
I have now made another level, try it if you want to... It´s called Spinning in the trees. I guess that´s what it´s all about...
http://www.kopaka.dk/up/updir/AL03.lev
almost up there?
and is 18:xx possible... perhaps.
Hi all
Hi u all people here!
here i come again with a new lvl for u. i hope u like it in someway... http://sites.euit.com/mikko.melakoski/mikko888.lev its my first this kind of a lvl. ill hope u have the energy to write some comments ///Huli
here i come again with a new lvl for u. i hope u like it in someway... http://sites.euit.com/mikko.melakoski/mikko888.lev its my first this kind of a lvl. ill hope u have the energy to write some comments ///Huli
Re: Hi all
stupid gravity. deleting level...huli wrote:Hi u all people here!
here i come again with a new lvl for u. i hope u like it in someway... http://sites.euit.com/mikko.melakoski/mikko888.lev its my first this kind of a lvl. ill hope u have the energy to write some comments ///Huli
tip: see http://www.moposite.com/misc_text_files ... y_nemo.txt
made this one a couple of days ago, some maybe seen it already and i think i'll post it here for some reviews
Sponge Bob:
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Sponge Bob:
http://www.geocities.com/kgelma/Kes21.zip
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Good afternoon everyone, I have to say this is a great site!
I'd love for some people to rate these maps, they're my first set named Spiky.
Keep in mind there's no grass because I haven't figured out how to put it in yet, and personally all the other pictures annoy me. In other words, if I knew how to do it I'd have put grass in.
These levels are made to be challenging, each one more challenging than the one previous. I don't particularily need all 4 reviewed, most preferrably number 4 which I spent the most time on.
Have fun, and enjoy them!
http://www.zworqy.com/up/files/Spikypack01.zip
I'd love for some people to rate these maps, they're my first set named Spiky.
Keep in mind there's no grass because I haven't figured out how to put it in yet, and personally all the other pictures annoy me. In other words, if I knew how to do it I'd have put grass in.
These levels are made to be challenging, each one more challenging than the one previous. I don't particularily need all 4 reviewed, most preferrably number 4 which I spent the most time on.
Have fun, and enjoy them!
http://www.zworqy.com/up/files/Spikypack01.zip
I don't have time for deep review now but I can say couple of things which I noticed: don't make anything invisible, ever. It's one of the very basic rules of level making. Second, it's usually the best to not make so tight holes or pipes that the wheel won't fit in well and gets pressure. I hope you understand what I mean. An example would be spiky04 on the end of second floor when you fly towards spikes and wheel get between them. It will get buggy.
And I can understand you like speedy levels, almost everybody likes speedy levels when they start making them. Later many people start appreciating slower paced levels which require difficult moves, not just driving fast trough the level.
And I can understand you like speedy levels, almost everybody likes speedy levels when they start making them. Later many people start appreciating slower paced levels which require difficult moves, not just driving fast trough the level.
I thought I would upload a level for the public to enjoy.
Name: Radioactive
Type: Tricky/expert level
Special notes: why no grass??!?!
Screenshots:
Download: http://www.mxb.dk/upload/reviewme.lev
Name: Radioactive
Type: Tricky/expert level
Special notes: why no grass??!?!
Screenshots:
Download: http://www.mxb.dk/upload/reviewme.lev
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Great level! =)
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great level!
first part was fun because it was a little tricky and stuff but when the second part comes it goes very fast paced and the end is superb because its easy but still alot of styling to do to save seconds.
first part was fun because it was a little tricky and stuff but when the second part comes it goes very fast paced and the end is superb because its easy but still alot of styling to do to save seconds.
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Are you LOST?
Are you LOST?