My first map

[MAx_]

I think I did pretty OK, but some tips from you pros would be nice, so what do you guys think?

Some feedback to improve the level would be appreciated.

Ps. I've also got a replay where I finish the map if you guys can't finish it without knowing what to do.

Beat It!


But for now, only the level.

[petsen]

typical noob lev :>

ill go play

[The_BoneLESS]

Things you should defintly make better :

- Make some grass, if you don't know how, check this link : http://zworqy.com/elmaguide/index.html ( go in the Editor part, click Elma Editor, it's lower in the page )

- I don't really know if there's more than one style but, you should make it a little clearer...

- The level may be a little long for most players.

But beside that, the level could be really great !

[Rez]

Tip: make one polygon instead of two polygons close to eachother

[Wezz]

Tip: make one polygon instead of two polygons close to eachother

Yes, listen to that tip, dude!
Mostly, it is just very annoying when 2 polygons is very very close to eachother bcauz teh editor wanted it to be so close, so kuskis cant see it!

[Kopaka]

No speedboosters, it makes the level too hard when you get max speed.

[MAx_]

Yeah, I might put in some grass in the level, make it a little more good looking.

The part about the two polygons I didn't quite understand, could you spesify where the problem is located?

About the map beeing too long, I finished it in 2.30, I don't think that's too long. I'll put out the replay so you can see what style I used.

Thanks for the replies

replay

[Wezz]

2.30 is long 4 a level, and most ppl dont play levz which takz too long to finish

[teajay]

Well, some things require quite some mongo styles, which can't be done in a flowing style. That's when a long level becomes annoying.