Hi,
I'm not the best player but I made some levels in the editor, please rate them. First ones are the oldest so they looks a bit rusty.
Easy lev pack
http://rapidshare.de/files/13396333/Lev.rar.html
Harder levels
http://rapidshare.de/files/13506839/26slonko.lev.html
http://rapidshare.de/files/13547537/27slonko.lev.html
Havoc's mappack. Please Rate it.
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jonsterion
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Ok I´ll make a short review of your pack:
Playability 5/10:
Since this is your first pack I would say it is ok when it comes to playability. You didn´t abuse of annoying things such as invisible walls and neverending gravity levels. Those speed/bug starts are not fun believe me :p They were "fun" 3-4 years ago when they were considered a "new trick". It´s obvious that your last levels are better and that you were knowing better editor´s possibilitys. When creating a level, try to make it in a few polygons, instead of adding multiple polygons close to the ground. Conclusion: avoid bug starts, try to add some complexity to your levels, not too much loopish levels, no auto-levs (not cool).
Visuallity 5/10:
The visuallity is ok aswell. You didn´t do the typical mistake begginners tend to do: flooding levs with pictures. Your grass is nice: try to keep it with a constant width, not too fat, not too thin. Placing pitures in background (clipping over 500 or equal) would be nice so that the pictures don´t get in front of your bike and difficult the playability.
ALLWAYS use "sky" has background, other skins hurt hte eyes
Overall 5.2/10
Times:
Haven´t got much time to play...
02slonko.lev : 1,08,46 on first try
Keep it up man, quite nice for your first pack! Try to play others´ levs and read some tutorials. Hang at #battle at ircnet so you can check fast made quality levs from many different players. #battle is also a good way of getting your levs played by good players.
Note: I didn´t try last two levels, so I´ll edit my post when I do so.
Playability 5/10:
Since this is your first pack I would say it is ok when it comes to playability. You didn´t abuse of annoying things such as invisible walls and neverending gravity levels. Those speed/bug starts are not fun believe me :p They were "fun" 3-4 years ago when they were considered a "new trick". It´s obvious that your last levels are better and that you were knowing better editor´s possibilitys. When creating a level, try to make it in a few polygons, instead of adding multiple polygons close to the ground. Conclusion: avoid bug starts, try to add some complexity to your levels, not too much loopish levels, no auto-levs (not cool).
Visuallity 5/10:
The visuallity is ok aswell. You didn´t do the typical mistake begginners tend to do: flooding levs with pictures. Your grass is nice: try to keep it with a constant width, not too fat, not too thin. Placing pitures in background (clipping over 500 or equal) would be nice so that the pictures don´t get in front of your bike and difficult the playability.
ALLWAYS use "sky" has background, other skins hurt hte eyes
Overall 5.2/10
Times:
Haven´t got much time to play...
02slonko.lev : 1,08,46 on first try
Keep it up man, quite nice for your first pack! Try to play others´ levs and read some tutorials. Hang at #battle at ircnet so you can check fast made quality levs from many different players. #battle is also a good way of getting your levs played by good players.
Note: I didn´t try last two levels, so I´ll edit my post when I do so.
belele
Here is another one. I took your advices:
http://rapidshare.de/files/13904762/28slonko.lev.html
http://rapidshare.de/files/13904762/28slonko.lev.html
Be Cool.
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jonsterion
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