the poem topic
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You are suck.
Elma.
Fuck.
Elma.
Fuck.
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Mongolialainen kukka
Evilä, ei ei ei
varpaassani on karva
se on omena
nick-o-matic
ulostetta joka paikassa
My entry for Mäntyharjus library 150 years poem contest. Will translate for request.
Evilä, ei ei ei
varpaassani on karva
se on omena
nick-o-matic
ulostetta joka paikassa
My entry for Mäntyharjus library 150 years poem contest. Will translate for request.
Last edited by roope on 31 Aug 2009, 00:10, edited 3 times in total.
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request
Thorze wrote:I just wanted to make a cool topic like Juish have cool topics..
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Mongolian flower
Evilä, no no no
there's a hair in my toe
it's an apple
nick-o-matic
feces everywhere
Evilä, no no no
there's a hair in my toe
it's an apple
nick-o-matic
feces everywhere
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So beautiful.
i cried.
i cried.
Cyberscore!
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If you really made this for that library, I respect you roope
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Yes, I did send it in o/ the winning poem will be printed in a set of bookmarks.
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LOL would be mega funny
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"A new cup-level!" I said with a smile,
after an hour, I found the best style,
the lev was cool, I was all set,
but one damn apple was impsy to get.
I höyled for hours, which turned to a day,
all food and drinks was shoveled away,
that impsy apple, I was so close,
one pixel or something, and then I froze.
I then blacked out, and went to the greater,
my sister and brother found me two days later,
the screen was on, it was green and vain,
"You failed to finish, play again?"
A short week after I was down the ground,
with all my family and friends all around,
there grew up a tree, it looked like a planch,
with a red small apple, hanging from a branch.
after an hour, I found the best style,
the lev was cool, I was all set,
but one damn apple was impsy to get.
I höyled for hours, which turned to a day,
all food and drinks was shoveled away,
that impsy apple, I was so close,
one pixel or something, and then I froze.
I then blacked out, and went to the greater,
my sister and brother found me two days later,
the screen was on, it was green and vain,
"You failed to finish, play again?"
A short week after I was down the ground,
with all my family and friends all around,
there grew up a tree, it looked like a planch,
with a red small apple, hanging from a branch.
Last edited by Cfilorvy on 3 Sep 2009, 20:15, edited 1 time in total.
TT: 42
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fucking awesome Cfilorvy!!!!!! THATS AWESOME, gratss!!
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I liked.. but I don't like the "A" when ppl mean "I"
Thorze wrote:I just wanted to make a cool topic like Juish have cool topics..
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Aaah.. typo.. Edited nowXiphias wrote:I liked.. but I don't like the "A" when ppl mean "I"
TT: 42
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Just fantastic.
Finally quality on this site!
Finally quality on this site!
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ah k thx =) I thought it was like some ppl on belma.. "A just improved warm pu )))"Cfilorvy wrote:Aaah.. typo.. Edited nowXiphias wrote:I liked.. but I don't like the "A" when ppl mean "I"
Thorze wrote:I just wanted to make a cool topic like Juish have cool topics..
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No it's because they are so nab that they typed "A" as a name when opening elma for the first time, to save time.
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I woke up one morning, with a vast premonition,
"höyl for WR in Warm Up, that is your mission",
I turned on the computer, half past eleven,
my sucky PR; 14.27.
My summer vacation had come to a start,
I sat on my room with one mission at heart,
all of my friends had gone far, far away,
so my excuses were those, and now I could stay.
With exceptions of eating and a few hours sleep,
a was dug down in belma, and yes, very deep,
After one höyling month, 14.03,
"I can actually make it", I started to see.
Then, one cloudy morning, a crossed the red line,
when I finished the level, and saw, .99!
I sent rec in to px, but damn, I was late,
damn Zweq, he had höyled too, and got .98
"höyl for WR in Warm Up, that is your mission",
I turned on the computer, half past eleven,
my sucky PR; 14.27.
My summer vacation had come to a start,
I sat on my room with one mission at heart,
all of my friends had gone far, far away,
so my excuses were those, and now I could stay.
With exceptions of eating and a few hours sleep,
a was dug down in belma, and yes, very deep,
After one höyling month, 14.03,
"I can actually make it", I started to see.
Then, one cloudy morning, a crossed the red line,
when I finished the level, and saw, .99!
I sent rec in to px, but damn, I was late,
damn Zweq, he had höyled too, and got .98
TT: 42
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a ≠ I
Thorze wrote:I just wanted to make a cool topic like Juish have cool topics..
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He acrossed the red line. Sach pun.Xiphias wrote:a ≠ I
John: lol hittade ett popcorn i naveln
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Haha! This time I intentionally made that typo, just for you XiphXiphias wrote:a ≠ I
You've found them both times
But, a crossed (acrossed) the line sound a bit cool too
TT: 42
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Haha, true story!
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elma-dikt:
nu står jag i valet och kvalet
elma var kul på 00-talet
ska jag fortsätta att lira?
eller ska jag endast dricka
jag har slutat mången gång
när abstinensen är som värst bryter jag ut i denna sång:
kanske man skulle göra en bejublad comeback \\o \o/ o//
sätta världsrekord på någon gammal track \o7
nej det är väl omöjligt \o)
rentav löjligt [o/
att det skulle gå (o/
när ryssar och mongolier höylar på \o/
nu står jag i valet och kvalet
elma var kul på 00-talet
ska jag fortsätta att lira?
eller ska jag endast dricka
jag har slutat mången gång
när abstinensen är som värst bryter jag ut i denna sång:
kanske man skulle göra en bejublad comeback \\o \o/ o//
sätta världsrekord på någon gammal track \o7
nej det är väl omöjligt \o)
rentav löjligt [o/
att det skulle gå (o/
när ryssar och mongolier höylar på \o/
[i cruise, i lev, i live]
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Sjukt bra ju!
John: lol hittade ett popcorn i naveln
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(19:52:36) (@Madnezz) ib9814.lev by igge!!!
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(19:52:36) (@Madnezz) ib9814.lev by igge!!!
Zweq wrote:99.9999% of nabs haven't even opened the book yet and most of those that have are still on the first pages
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pomegranate of everything important in secret areaing - visitation 5. enforce the fruit
poems is bads
elma are goods
goods can be eaten
john can be beaten
outside it rains
water many pains
but also can cleanse
a head that is dense
if never go out
will find a sprout
in hair because dirty
zworqy turns thirty
elma in world can
show concealed funnies
but is not better than
ultrasoft bunnies
truth awaits in fifty-six
poems is bads
elma are goods
goods can be eaten
john can be beaten
outside it rains
water many pains
but also can cleanse
a head that is dense
if never go out
will find a sprout
in hair because dirty
zworqy turns thirty
elma in world can
show concealed funnies
but is not better than
ultrasoft bunnies
truth awaits in fifty-six
then again i don't know anything
maybe easier not to think abouut alöl things thought than not things thought ... or something..=?
maybe easier not to think abouut alöl things thought than not things thought ... or something..=?
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Django Reinhardt
a 16-bar rhythmic overview
na-boom chick na-boom chick na-boom chick na-boom chick
na-boom chick na-boom chick na-boom chick na-boom chick
na-boom chick na-boom chick na-boom chick na-boom chick
na-boom chick na-boom chick na-boom chick na-boom chick
na-boom dum-dum-dum na-boom dum-dum-dum
na-boom dum-dum-dum dum-dum-dum-dum
da-boom dam-dam-dam dam-dam-dam-dam
daa-aa-aa-aam da-da-da-dam da-da-da-dam-da-aa-aam
a 16-bar rhythmic overview
na-boom chick na-boom chick na-boom chick na-boom chick
na-boom chick na-boom chick na-boom chick na-boom chick
na-boom chick na-boom chick na-boom chick na-boom chick
na-boom chick na-boom chick na-boom chick na-boom chick
na-boom dum-dum-dum na-boom dum-dum-dum
na-boom dum-dum-dum dum-dum-dum-dum
da-boom dam-dam-dam dam-dam-dam-dam
daa-aa-aa-aam da-da-da-dam da-da-da-dam-da-aa-aam
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u
me
us
all together
<3
me
us
all together
<3
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pomegranate of everything important in secret areaing - visitation 6. death
boom
boom
then again i don't know anything
maybe easier not to think abouut alöl things thought than not things thought ... or something..=?
maybe easier not to think abouut alöl things thought than not things thought ... or something..=?
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Some random limerick
She told me her boyfriend was gone,
Excited, I thought: "I've won!",
I cruised down her pipes,
while searching for wipes,
after reaching her flower, I was done.
another version:
She told me her boyfriend was gone,
Excited, I thought: "I've won!",
I cruised down her pipe,
I felt she was ripe,
after reaching her flower, I was done.
She told me her boyfriend was gone,
Excited, I thought: "I've won!",
I cruised down her pipes,
while searching for wipes,
after reaching her flower, I was done.
another version:
She told me her boyfriend was gone,
Excited, I thought: "I've won!",
I cruised down her pipe,
I felt she was ripe,
after reaching her flower, I was done.
TT: 42
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Today is, like many might say
A very, very special day;
It is as hot, bright and sunny,
As it is nice, sweet and funny.
It's the kind of moment when
You look a bit behind and
Consider how fast time goes:
So quick you would want to pause.
Try to fully live the moment,
Is what I actually meant;
Because today's a special day,
Today is your happy birthday.
I suck at poetry + it is late + English is my second language + I am lame = this
I wrote that to a girl on facebook and then thought "wtf is this crap" and removed it and just said some yay-birthday standard boring useless shit. Sad story is true. I guess it's better than awkwardness.
A very, very special day;
It is as hot, bright and sunny,
As it is nice, sweet and funny.
It's the kind of moment when
You look a bit behind and
Consider how fast time goes:
So quick you would want to pause.
Try to fully live the moment,
Is what I actually meant;
Because today's a special day,
Today is your happy birthday.
I suck at poetry + it is late + English is my second language + I am lame = this
I wrote that to a girl on facebook and then thought "wtf is this crap" and removed it and just said some yay-birthday standard boring useless shit. Sad story is true. I guess it's better than awkwardness.
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I think you should've posted it no matter how shitty it is o,o because it's not that shitty, typical teen poem :D)
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Well I'm not typical and I don't act like a teen anymore, therefore it is shitty.
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heh :dBismuth wrote:I don't act like a teen anymore
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I wrote that to a girl on facebook
I don't act like a teen anymore
<Pawq> at a gym you have only 3 options: 1. have your eyes closed, 2. stare at yourself, 3. stare at others, all of which are either super boring or disgusting
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I have written many poems and songs for girls when I have a girlfriend, here is one of them:
You
Her swift movement can lift the soul of any man
And when I wake the sun does not gleam upon my face
But upon her grace
I ask myself what meaning do my ears, my taste, and feeling have when all I need
Are merely my eyes?
Through her glow I find my serenity, my peace
As I'm thoughtless, she is my only joy and release
And as she speaks, that voice could daze me for eternity
And I wonder and ask myself, what need is my taste for, my feeling and touch
When I have my ears?
With skin like feathers, I stroke her cheek
I lose myself forever, my knees weak
Shivers up my spine, and tingles on the back of my neck
I ask myself, whats the meaning of taste
When all I need is my feeling and her touch?
And then we kiss
And as I taste her lips, close my eyes
Block all sound, and lose all feeling
I ask myself, what's the meaning of anything
When all I need is you?
You
Her swift movement can lift the soul of any man
And when I wake the sun does not gleam upon my face
But upon her grace
I ask myself what meaning do my ears, my taste, and feeling have when all I need
Are merely my eyes?
Through her glow I find my serenity, my peace
As I'm thoughtless, she is my only joy and release
And as she speaks, that voice could daze me for eternity
And I wonder and ask myself, what need is my taste for, my feeling and touch
When I have my ears?
With skin like feathers, I stroke her cheek
I lose myself forever, my knees weak
Shivers up my spine, and tingles on the back of my neck
I ask myself, whats the meaning of taste
When all I need is my feeling and her touch?
And then we kiss
And as I taste her lips, close my eyes
Block all sound, and lose all feeling
I ask myself, what's the meaning of anything
When all I need is you?
God Bless America
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hence the deletion. grow a brain.abruzzi wrote:I wrote that to a girl on facebookI don't act like a teen anymore
That's nice gimp, you're a much better poet than I am.
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TODAY IS SO GHEY
I wanted to say
but then I said HAPPEY BIRTHDAY
and she said okay
I wanted to say
but then I said HAPPEY BIRTHDAY
and she said okay
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i feel like spamming on mopolauta
nyt ei jumalauta jumalakaan auta
nyt ei jumalauta jumalakaan auta
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